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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Writing about drug induced hallucinations and paranoia

Not long ago I wrote a short story about a mathematics graduate student on the verge of a nervous breakdown. The young student is innocent and working to finish a difficult mathematical derivation ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Amichai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I indent the first line of the first paragraph in a chapter?

I was reading a thesis report of a friend and I noticed that he didn't indent the first line of the first paragraph in each chapter. I don't remember noticing it anywhere before until I saw it ther...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Lipis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I write a synopsis?

I have to write a synopsis to submit to an agent. Are there any guidelines for writing a good synopsis?

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Elizabeth Schechter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does the 10,000 hour rule apply to writing?

The 10,000 hour rule, popularised by Malcolm Gladwell, says that: the key to success in any field is, to a large extent, a matter of practicing a specific task for a total of around 10,000 hour...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Adding breaks in a novel—spaces, asterisks, or a chapter break?

I am editing my first novel and wherever I find a natural break in the story, I add a few spaces. I want to go back and adjust what types of breaks those are, but how best to represent those spaces...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by J. Leigh Hunter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Multiple POVs in a single scene

This question came up in another forum, so I thought I'd share it here. Should there be only one POV per scene? Is it OK to go with multiple POVs? An example is a scene with two characters facing ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Italicizing and adding accents to Spanish words in an English novel

In my current novel I have a few characters who speak Spanish. The book takes place along the Texico border, so it happens frequently. I know that in more foreign Spanish, or when someone speaks a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by J. Leigh Hunter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there an accepted format for comedy sketch writing?

I have been doing Google searches for examples or teleplays to download that may offer insight for sketch comedy writing. Is there a specific format that those in the industry follow or is simply ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kevin O'Shea‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does a technical writer need a technical background?

Does a technical writer need a technical background?

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Our note in footnote of a book

How do I designate the footnotes that are mine inside a quote? I tried "our note", "note ours" and "remark is ours". Which one is the correct one and most commonly used? Or is there some other way...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Andriy Drozdyuk‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this convey that I recommend the anthology I'm reviewing?

Here's a snipped-up version of a review of an anthology I wrote a while back (full original review here). Most of the stories were pretty good, a few were superb, and there were a few poor ones. Fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do hardcover books retail for more than three times the cost of softcover books?

One thing I've noticed while browsing bookstores is that hardcover books tend to cost more than softcover ones. Oftentimes a hardcover book that's five times the price of a paperback doesn't have ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kalamane‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the best way to show a foreign language in a manuscript?

What's the best way to show a character speaking a foreign language in a fiction manuscript? Should the foreign words be italicized and include a translation? Should it just be included in the sent...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to handle foreign military ranks?

Suppose you have a character who has a rank in a foreign military - say, Feldwebel Hans. That's the equivalent of a Sergeant. On one hand, having people call him "Herr Feldwebel" gives some flavor...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by ggambett‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can a book be written without an antagonist?

I have had this thought running through my head and wondered what your thoughts were on it. Can a book, a story I should say, be written without an antagonist or antagonistic theme? I have an ide...

10 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Michael‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does my story structure for an ensemble zombie story sound effective?

I'm working on a novel about the psychological struggle of 7 characters. It's got an ensemble cast, where every character has the same importance. I've got a structure for this that sounds good to ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by robizeratul‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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About using authentic historical name for teenager material

I am writing a (short) story set in Ancient Egypt, and the intended audience are junior high-senior high school students in the US. I am trying to use authentic Ancient Egyptian names for the chara...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Fitri‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should this ‘be going to’ be revised?

I don't know if I can ask about this in this site. But anyway I'll give it a shot. (This question is a spin-off from EL&U.) Here is a skit from a radio English conversation program, dealing wi...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What needs to be included in a corporate style guide?

What kinds of things need to be included in a corporate style guide that can't already be found in S&W, AP, Chicago Style, etc?

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by dddppp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do ebooks often mimic the layout of the printed page?

I was recently editing a novel destined to be published primarily in e-book form, and made a list of pre-press instructions, to be followed when the final text is agreed upon. Some of these instruc...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Neil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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plagiarism vs. reference?

I just finished reading the annotated edition of Lolita, and Nabokov hid references to other works of literature everywhere. Lately I've also been considering ways to work in lyrics and other obliq...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by kevboh‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Resources on plotting mystery stories

I'm looking for books, essays and articles on plotting mystery/detective/investigation stories (and novels). The type of story I'm aiming for is in the vein of Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie, or ...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Software for analyzing a manuscript?

I would like to get a better picture of a manuscript I've written, especially in regards to word usage patterns and potentially overused terms. I'm curious whether anyone can recommend a document ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any techniques that make complexity work?

One for the creative writers, although I suppose a lateral shift might put it within reach of journalists/technical writers. As authors we all want to write, I would imagine: Something that many...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Critique of short essay [closed]

Basically I need some critics regarding the following points: Does this description essay archive its goal (a creepy story with a 'sappy' ending)? How is the 'rhythm' of the story (is there some...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Jumping on the Zombie bandwagon

Is it too late to jump on the zombie bandwagon? There are loads of stories about the possible popular outcome of an apocalypse, is it possible to squeeze anything more out of it? Or, maybe it wou...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Axarydax‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should I approach possibly unfamiliar pop culture in fiction?

So sometimes I get an idea that forms specifically around some aspect of pop culture. They're often song lyrics. If the reader knows the song, they appreciate the symbolism and allegory or whatev...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Turnips‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tips for humor writing

Are there any techniques you can use while brainstorming to find humor to include in an article?

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Gary‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Looking for story that deliberately overused "get" [closed]

It was in Writer's Digest, probably the early 1980s, when I saw this. One of the regular columnists (or was it an irregular columnist?) went on a brief rant about careless writers overusing the wo...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by DarenW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to cite an entire paragraph?

How to cite an entire paragraph taken from a book? Is it just writing the paragraph as a separate one and adding (Author, Year) in the end? Will it not imply that only the last sentence in the para...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Chethan S.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Character Development - How much is too much?

I've read loads of books where the reaction and development of characters seems to extreme for the events that effect them in the story. However not having any development makes the character bori...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Joel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Feedback on technical blog post

I've recently composed a blog post about World of Warcraft Authenticators and would love for some feedback as per the quality of writing. Obviously no matter how many times I read it there's no su...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by m.edmondson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How credible is wikipedia? [closed]

I understand that this question relates more to wikipedia than it does writing but... If I was going to use wikipedia for a source for a research project (for example) would the information be cor...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by alexyorke‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using slang as a narrator - pros and cons

Is it advisable to use slang and euphemisms as a narrator, in addition to the main characters who use it? Are there arguments for and against it? For example, if I were to write about street thugs...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Axarydax‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are some examples of modern original plots?

In a comment on this answer, a valuable community contributor suggested that it is possible to be totally original in writing, despite the fact that other valuable community members have stated tha...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What to do if I end up confused by my own plot because of 'trying to be original' or 'trying to make the story more deep'?

Sometimes, I find myself in the dilemma that I come out with a plot that tells exactly what I want to say. But then, I try to modify it in order to make it more original (at least, less similar tha...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What can I do to improve my concentration when reading? [closed]

(I hope this is sufficiently on-topic - couldn't find anywhere else in Stack Exchange more suitable...) Currently I am having to do a lot of reading of academic papers - some dry stuff but not exc...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mark Gibaud‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A rhyming dictionary worth bookmarking online or purchasing?

Has anyone come across any really good rhyming dictionaries? If so, what makes it worth having/bookmarking? (eg. completeness/ease of use/absence of really sketchy suggestions)

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by mootinator‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to avoid hearing "that's me!" from your friends when they read your characters?

I recently asked about getting inside of someone else's head for writing good characters who are noticeably different from myself and received some great answers. One answer suggested that you sho...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?

Notes: My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! Please critique ruthlessly. I would send by Facebook message to a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user1372‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writers Communities?

I don't mean writer's circles, or "auditioning sites", although some of these have forums tacked on as a by the by. Usually places to talk about the beardy philosophy of writing are moribund places...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do fullscreen writing environments help for writing? Why? [closed]

I recently found out about full-screen writing applications like OmniWriter and DarkRoom and I'm interested in using them, but I'm skeptical as to whether or not these are actually useful for impro...

8 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mana‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you avoid purple prose?

I try to watch out for bland, overused adjectives and I keep adverbs to a minimum but -- I hear this phrase a lot and I'm not even sure what it means?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ben‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make a letter interesting?

I have a question regarding the art of letter writing. I believe in the old-fashioned way of maintaining pen friendships (not necessarily a relationship, but could be) through hand-written letters...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Victor123‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What makes first person plural a tricky narrative voice?

I absolutely loved Joshua Ferris's debut novel Then We Came to the End. Critics highly praised his use for the first person plural as a narrator. The work is set in an office and the "we" used re...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Pantsing a story?

I heard a writer talking about pantsing a story. What does that mean?

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Elizabeth Schechter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Fan Fiction: a crutch or a good start?

Writing is writing, but I am not confident enough to take on creating a whole world from scratch. Will writing fanfic or writing in other shared world spaces be beneficial, or will it simply allow...

8 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Larry Smithmier‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Different kinds of editors

I've noticed references to different kinds of editors such as copy editor, line editor and development editor. I'd like to know the different categories of editors and their job descriptions.

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Sky Red‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any techniques to arrange or list ideas from a short text? [closed]

For example I wrote this: !Paying! for exams, and also books to pass them is only a small price / to give poor people the opportunity / ...to contribute for the MANSIONS of the people in ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What should be in a cover letter for short story submission to a magazine?

It's been about five years since I last submitted any of my work for publication, and my memory of what I was taught then to put in my cover letter is getting rusty. What kind of information sho...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭