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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Using published pictures for a book based on a true story

I'm going to write a book based on a true story. I want to know if for a book cover I could use real photos of the people who were in that story. They are dead but their pictures are published on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user39779‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Content Sites - any still around and useful?

I missed my chance to write for About.Com when it was TheMiningCom and now it's DotDash and seems to be under different rules. Suite101 has become Suite.io (blocked from my work, so that's all I k...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should a narrator ever describe things based on a character's view instead of facts?

There is something I find myself doing often while writing, and I don't even know what to call it, but I would like to know if its good practice. It happens when I'm writing from a third-person per...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Reinstate Monica NOW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Telephone Conversations

The Situation: I am writing a short story. My POV character is listening to another person having a telephone conversation. The POV character only hears the one person speaking and not the response...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Walter Sanville‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Prahara‭

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Should I signal completion of a decision point in an interactive novel?

In my visual novel (an interactive, narrative-based video-game), I have a detective character who decides whether he believes interviewees controlled by the player. The detective doesn't explain ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we tell someone how to sing a lyric?

People usually use a musical sheet to tell how a song should be sung, but when you read a lyric you have no idea how a song should be sung without having the musical sheet in front of you, so is th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we prevent Madcap Flare from injecting non-breaking spaces in our documentation?

We use Madcap Flare for our documentation, and it has an annoying property: if you happen to have the shift key down when you type a space, it inserts a non-breaking space (&#160;). Our docume...

2 answers  ·  posted 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4mo ago by Mithical‭

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Coloured comments in a word processor [Word/Libre/OpenOffice] - is it possible?

Is there a way to have comments in different colours, in Microsoft Word, Open Office Writer, or Libre Office? (I am currently using Open Office, and I'm happy with it, but I am open to making the s...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Publishers that drag their feet

How do you deal with frustration over a publisher's choices? All the stories and art for an anthology are in the publisher's hands—camera ready in digital form—and approved (deadline was 4 months...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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I don't want to be introduced as a "Minority Novelist"

I started writing a novel directly tied to my background in which the protagonist and her surrounding environment have many characteristics in common with mine. As I wrote the first chapter, I re...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tawsonfield‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a sincerely religious protagonist without preaching or affirming or judging their worldview?

I am writing a book in which one of my main characters is a devout Catholic. His struggles with reconciling his religion and his experiences in life are crucial to his character and I'd like to por...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by wordsworth‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Building a scene and readability

When building a scene at the beginning of a chapter for instance, before character interactions take place, what are the important elements to consider, and how long should the description be, befo...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Lanet Rino‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using time travel without creating plot holes [closed]

There are different types of time travel (they have different rules and constraints) throughout literature, so I was wondering if you could list some of them here, and which ones are best for drivi...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I answer high-school writing prompts without sounding weird and fake?

Being given a prompt makes me freeze up immediately. Let me clarify. I'm talking about high school writing prompts. You know. Those. The ones that ask you to write an essay about what you would c...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Carlos Cienfuegos‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are some genuine sites for content writing? [closed]

What are some good genuine sites on the web for paid freelance content writing, proof-reading etc.? Even though I do not have any degree in journalism (full-time or part-time), I believe I have a f...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by srini‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Adding depth to two-dimensional heroes from myths

For the recent writing exercise I wanted to tackle Beowulf's character. In the original saga, the hero Beowulf comes to the aid of king Hrothgar to defeat two monsters. Then, after a period of 50 ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a trilogy and editing [closed]

I planned out to write a trilogy and the first draft of book one is now completed. I want to know if I should edit this draft before starting on the second book.

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Shellz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to convert dialogue in to paragraph?

This is my first time writing a novel. In my novel, there is a part of the married life of my protagonist who is a woman. I don't have any experience of married life so I have taken inspiration fro...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is one way to write about feeling someone's sadness? [closed]

For example: I sensed as if he became sad from the way he spoke after telling him that I would go with her.

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Emilia March‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Famous mistranslations - correct them?

Often enough works of literature, particularly old classics, receive renewed translations. Sometimes, the older translation might contain mistakes. And sometimes, the work being an old classic, the...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Giving a character trauma but not "diagnosing" her?

In my post-apocalyptic novel, my MC Eris is severely traumatized by the death of her family at her own hands. Because of this, she has extreme aversion to social interaction and even physical cont...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Is having elaborate metaphors ever a bad thing?

Is having elaborate metaphors a bad thing in a short story (for the purposes of the story being accepted by a magazine)? How can I know if my metaphors are too elaborate?

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Yukang Jiang‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Scale: How to handle a personal story set in an epic war?

In both my last writing project and my current one, I have found an unexpected problem. Both tales are focused on a single character and their personal journey, but both tales are also set in the m...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How to tell readers that I know my story is factually incorrect?

Sometimes, it so happens that I do some research for a story and find that a major plot point could never work in real life. At this stage, I can either continue with my impossible (for a non-fanta...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tryin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Formatting a conversation

In a novel, how would one best represent a recorded conversation between two people played back to a larger audience? The normal rules apply regarding quotation marks and beginning a new paragraph ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Richie Hayes‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Consulting experts - why should they talk to someone who isn't a published writer yet?

Whatever subject I am researching for my story, the common recommendation is "talk to the relevant professionals". If I need medical information, talk to a doctor. If I need information about the m...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can we use other things than single-word verbs in our dialog tags?

"Albert, you're already drunk! Stop it!" she implored him. "Nah, if I stop drinking, I won't have an excuse to miss work tommorrow!" he joked around. I am wondering if it's possible to ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by yocu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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How do I start off in web comics?

I’m a beginner writer planning on learning how to write webcomics. My main one is an adventure/fantasy webcomic and the other is a card battle webcomic (I draw a lot of inspiration from anime and m...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Voizex ‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to know you are over-explaining and oversimplifying a subject?

Recently, I started writing articles about different subjects I learn on my own (programming, logic ...etc). While writing, I have this tendency to overexplain, I know that readers are smart, but ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by SmootQ‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can non-English-speaking characters use wordplay specific to English?

Would it be jarring if in an original (non-translated) story, the characters, who don't speak English in-universe, use "untranslatable" wordplay/puns that are specific to English? By "untranslatab...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Friendly Neighborhood Demon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should the audience be immediately aware of the reason for a flashback?

In the pilot episode of "The Americans" Elizabeth has a flashback to something that happened twenty years earlier. Seeing her reflection triggers the flashback, but a reflection seems to have no e...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Bob516‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it bad style if the personal first person narrator of a story dies during said story?

Right now I'm writing a novel in which I use the changing perspectives of two main characters with limited information each to slowly unveil the whole plot to the reader. Both use the past tense a...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by DLCom‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding burnout

As a writer, I sometimes have trouble seeing a project to the end. Sometimes it is because I reach an impasse. Sometimes it is because I choose to scrap it for whatever personal reason. And sometim...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Beyond letters and diaries—exercises to explore characters' personalities and motivation

For a few of my imaginary worlds, my characters write letters to each other. These letters are never intended to be surfaced in the main story, they are my exploration of the characters' feelings a...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by sezmeralda‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Introducing a new POV near the end of a story

This question is strongly related to this one: Balance between character's point of views However, that question is asking about balancing POVs in general, whereas this one is about potentially su...

6 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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If you are beginner when it come to writing, should you be pantser? Or plotter? [closed]

I asked my friends this question, they say being a plotter is better for a beginner, then once you get good you transition to pantser. I ask here because I hope to get advice from professional (or ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Haru cat lover‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Protagonist Goal and achieving it [closed]

My MC is a famous singer/songwriter who is bad at writing lyrics. Her goal is to write commercially successful, deep, serious songs. How do I design the character arc in relation to this goal? Also...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Empress Molly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I use the words "pyromancy" and "necromancy" even if they don't mean what people think they do?

If you look up the exact definition for "pyromancy" or "necromancy" they refer to divination using fire and the dead, respectively. However, if you were to ask a layperson what those words mean, t...

9 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is another word for "character-building"? [closed]

I want to say that the author uses Character A's "character development" to explore Character B. In other words, the author builds on the personality of A to exemplify the nature of B. What is an...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Aniket‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can one be a co-translator of a book, if he does not know the language that the book is translated into?

I am translating a religious book from language A to language B and have hired a student worker to help me. He is a native speaker of language A but does not speak language B at all. What I ask him...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Zuriel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Identifying and managing weak scenes during planning

I structured my plot, designed the path to the climax, listed my characters and even outlined some scenes. Then halfway through I got stuck: one minor transition scene just did not make sense. The ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Usage of an old photo with expired copyright

I would like to use an old photo/postcard (example 1, example 2) for a non-commercial poster. The poster is for a school assignment. The photo would illustrate a map and text about the history of t...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Thomas Zuberbühler‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to ensure that neurotic or annoying characters don't get tiring in the long run

A is a special snowflake, though for all the wrong reasons. You see, he was born with a special ability that allowed him to see premonitions of his and his loved ones' future in the form of still i...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Confused about when to treat something as a dialogue tag

Background: I'm helping a friend edit their fiction. I'm frequently left confused on anything related to dialogue tags. “Yes, but I mean no,” Steve stumbles over his words. “Not the come hom...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by mh9‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In 2021, which publishers distribute novellas?

The Hugo awards are prominent fan awards in the SF&F genre. In 2021, I noticed that all of the finalists in the Novella category are from a single publisher, Tor.com. Novellas have, I underst...

2 answers  ·  posted 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 3y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How important are good looking people in a novel/story?

I've read many books where the main protagonists are described as good looking people with Greek god looks, plenty of sex appeal, the perfect figure and all that. As a reader, how important would i...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by srini‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Am I a new writer?

I have a very crudely written book that I self published through Amazon in 2013. I did not do any advertising for the book and it only sold about 80 copies. I am now in the process of a query let...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Steven Johnson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Picking a good story goal for a morally neutral character

A blogger with the name of Glen C. Strathy said the following: The first and most important element of any plot is the Story Goal or Problem. This is the organizing idea around which the enti...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you write short-short nonfiction?

I need to write an opinion, narrative of only 80 words in length. Examples: write about your fondest childhood memory/comment: homework should be banned, etc. How are short-short pieces like this...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Stacy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a difference between historical fiction and creative non-fiction?

I have seen two similar terms, historical fiction and creative non-fiction. I'm writing some stories that are set during a real time in history, that might mention real events, real people, but tha...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Village‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭