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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How to collect scattered ideas on various topics in to a blog post/ writing article?

I try to write on various Q&A sites, but now I am thinking about having my own blog website. The main thing is that I don't know exactly what my niche topics would be for blogs. I write on vari...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In a script how can I signal who's winning the argument?

Arguments, discussions, disagreements In my script I have a lot of "arguments" – loose definition: long discussions where characters disagree about what to do. These arguments don't escalate to ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Music & Focus During Writing [closed]

I hate listening to silence while I write, so I usually end up listening to music, but then I lose my focus. I don't really like classical or lo-fi that much and they don't help me concentrate on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Developing a dialogue that unexpectedly leads to strong feelings between two strangers

A short story I'm writing involves a stage in which the male protagonist talks to a stranger with the intent of asking them to do a favor for his friend. I want them to start having strong feelings...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tawsonfield‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Relationship Problems

In my plot, there are these 2 characters who were originally close to each other. However, they had an argument and broke up. In the end of the book, though, they get back together again. What I ne...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Jaystar‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Stereotypical names

In every country, some names are particularly common: 'John' in the UK, 'Juan' in Spain, 'Ivan' in Russia. Those names are common almost to the point of being stereotypical (consider 'John Doe'). ...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to identify target audience? And how much details do I need to know about my perfect reader?

I'm identifying my target audience based on the experiment explained in the Snowflake Method book. The narrator describes it as follows: “Now I want you to imagine that you’ve published your no...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you keep track of projects/ideas until you have time to write them down?

I've read the answers to this question but they focus on getting ideas written down pretty much as they occur, that's not my issue, I have both digital and analog methods for doing so with me at al...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referring to different instances of the same character in time travel

I am writing a story that involves time travel, and I have a chapter where a character from the future interacts with his present-day self. This chapter is written from the present-day self's POV. ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Tempo Mental‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a bad idea to have a character that has an "imaginary friend"?

In a story I'm working on, I'm adding a side character to travel with the two main characters because I realized I didn't have very much planned for actually showing who the main characters are and...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by M.Wallace‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are speaker tags always necessary when multiple people are in the conversation?

I understand that if you’ve got two people speaking, you often don’t need speaker tags because it’s assumed that both people take it in turns unless otherwise specified. This keeps the conversation...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mousentrude‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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A.I character that talks using pre-scripted messages. How do i make it seem more relatable?

I have some character stuff im trying to figure out for an AI antagonist. In a game development project that I am part of, there is an artificial intelligence that speaks to the player character t...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Fennecai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Kevin‭

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Re-reading and making changes to current work that makes everything worse?

I constantly re-read my work before writing again. It helps me get in the proper mind set. But my biggest problem is that I make more changes on what's already there that I don't get further along ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Darryl Simpson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are good places (online) where a community of writers can get together and share their knowledge about writing?

It would be nice to be a member of an online community of people who are knowledgeable about writing, willing to directly help eachother in a format such as Q&A (like here on SE), but also enga...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can one write good dialogue in a story without sounding wooden?

I began an assignment to write a short story for a Creative Writing submission to a publication and although it was accepted, I found that I struggled with the addition of dialogue to this first-pe...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Thimble‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is a section of a book published in a journal considered a journal source?

I have an assignment that requires one academic journal source, and I found the records for a journal. The article in question is from a previously published book, but was published in the journal ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by SiPo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Mortal danger in mid-grade literature

In a comment to my post here, Cyn mentions wishing to avoid implying that the characters might all die, because she's writing for a mid-grade audience. Which made me wonder. I remember reading Th...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I make distinctions between a hive-mind and a super consciousness?

Not sure if this is a worldbuilding or writing question, but here it goes. In this setting, gods of humanity are beings of absolute order that exist in another plane of existence. They are consta...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Incognito‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we spread a story across several different media without alienating our readers?

I thought about spreading a story across a video game, comic book and novel, but I am not sure if doing this will alienate my readers, because I don't believe people want to spend a ton of money to...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a good MacGuffin?

I backed myself into a corner and have to create a [TV TROPES WARNING] MacGuffin for a story. How can I create a good MacGuffin? How to make it interesting for the reader ? I don't know where to ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Cerise St Hilaire‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Third person story, containing a first person backstory

In several third person (usually limited) stories that I've read, there comes a time when one character shares some of their backstory to one or more other characters. This backstory is always (or...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Artsoccer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Would it be better to write a trilogy over a much longer series?

I'm planning out a long series (more than five books as is). It's very optimistic, I know. But I'm just wondering: Would it be better to plan out my series as a trilogy, leaving room to expand if...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Should fiction mention song names and iPods?

In my novel, the protagonist is depressed. In the story which is in my mind... The autumn leaves were falling as I was sitting alone and Gary Jules' "Mad World" was ringing in my iPod. The s...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Having multiple epilogues

According to Wikipedia, An epilogue is the final chapter at the end of a story that often serves to reveal the fates of the characters. Some epilogues may feature scenes only tangentially rela...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding cliches when writing gods

When writing fictional polytheisms, it's tempting to draw inspiration from the existing ones. In ancient religions (I'm mainly thinking of the Greek/Latin, Egyptian and Norse pantheons) there are ...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I explain the reasons for gaslighting?

I have an ambiguous script situation, 2 co-protagonists begin gaslighting the MC. They each have ulterior motives which they don't say. The reader is intended to infer the lies through contradictor...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to prove that my blog is just not average?

In the question What can I ask my readers to help me and how?, a skeptical answer is provided: my blog which is about challenging existing dogmas is just an average. There are many cranky blog of s...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Does this scene fail the Bechdel test?

My novel has approximately a dozen women in it, but they don’t tend to talk to each other. Most of them are separated geographically or philosophically and sitting down for a chat does not seem som...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we edit a novel that's written by several people?

Two other friends and I have been writing a fan fiction and we basically write a chapter each one after another every week. Now that we're nearing the end of the project, we've noticed that the wr...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to avoid drifting into a different genre?

My intention is to write a novel that falls into the "contemporary fiction" genre. Also, maybe, the "family drama" subgenre, if such a thing exists. I have a plot point that puts one of my characte...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When writing an error prompt, should we end the sentence with a exclamation mark or a dot?

When writing an error prompt, should we end the sentence with a exclamation mark or a dot? I am writing an application for iPhone and I have some error prompt in my application like "Your password...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should an author include user-interactive sections in his website?

Related questions: Should an author have one website or two? As an new author, how important is to have a personal website? Pros and Cons: A blog to get feedback A possible duplicate of, even i...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a place for an epilogue in a standalone novel?

By definition, an epilogue is an additional chapter after the end of a book. Also, it literally means "additional word". I can imagine a need for an epilogue in a series of novels when there is a ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What to submit when asked for "sample chapters"?

For a submission (to a grant program, competition, agent, or publisher) that asks for sample chapters, which chapters do you choose? For example, a grant program for unfinished works I'm intereste...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where's the balance between realism and story? [closed]

Mark mentioned in his answer that plotholes aren't usually the end of the world, and that I shouldn't sacrifice too much of the story and the characters for the sake of logic. But there's a breaki...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  edited 4y ago by Canina‭

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How and when should I introduce my main character's superpowers?

This story includes a select group of individuals who contain superpowers and the main character is obviously one of those few. I don't want to throw it out there straight away and am trying to hin...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Kyl‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted?

How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted? Often, movie scripts often only have dialogues and some very brief ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can you use a semicolon to connect fragments that are one item in a vertical list?

I'm trying to write a numbered vertical list. The items are not complete sentences. Can you use a semicolon to connect two fragments that are one item? Receive guests; entertain guests Or, sho...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by happycrabapples‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to change the readers opinion of a character?

So, I have a character who starts off a complete ass to everyone. She hates the world, especially the protagonist. Then again, she had no parents to her memory, her people are enslaved and continuo...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Compelling story with the world as a villain

My main character is up against the world, or, rather, the world and reality are up against her. A good story is in some ways defined by its villain. 1984 personifies its villain by adding a repr...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Calypso Writes‭  ·  last activity 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Should I self-publish my novella on Amazon or try my luck getting publishers?

I have completed my novellas first draft which is 32k words long. For all the reasons, I was doing research as to whether self-publish or try my luck getting a publisher. I should tell you that ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Shortening a title without changing its meaning

Essentially, I want to change: Managing a lot of people is a very difficult problem to: Lot of people, difficult problem I understand that when you shorten a title, it will become more vagu...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tefisjb‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Documenting story in a videogame

How does one write a story for a story-based videogame. Is it done in the form of a screenplay? Is it written as any normal prose? Is it written as documentation that goes with the other early desi...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Showing friendship between people of different ranks - maintain formality, or drop it?

There is a prince. (Or some other person of high rank.) And there is that prince's good friend, who, naturally, holds a somewhat lower rank. There are two ways I could show the close relationship ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What points should a "Character Interview" method for character building hit?

What should a character interview contain to be successful where the goals are: characters with strong voice who are established with a distinct 'personhood' (?) and are generally interesting to fo...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kirk‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Having Trouble Writing An Opening Scene With A Shy Character

I'm having a bit of trouble coming up with the opening scene for a fantasy story I'm writing, about a mousy but passionate girl from a family of entertainers who inherits the entertainer's blood. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Shikinoyume‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I turn my anal-retentiveness into a career?

When I'm reading something, I immediately pick up on typos, grammatical errors, misuse of punctuation, and the like, as well as better ways to phrase things. I have no formal education in any sort ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by John Doe‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should the dialogue reference be written, before or after the dialogue?

This might be a very trivial question but I don't know what to google to get an answer so asking anyways. In this dialogue; "I have such a miserable cold, your sarcastic remarks are hardly m...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A question on determining audience

I'm taking a writing course and the biggest challenge I'm facing is figuring out my audience — particularly for something I have written where I didn't have an audience in mind. Some topics or styl...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by L.Jeanne‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A thesaurus that detects rhyming

I have been looking for a word that rhymes with post with similar meaning to a school. But I go to thesaurus.com, sounding the words on my head for results under "school" and none rhyme. I then tr...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Jossie Calderon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭