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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How do we write a good edit on Wikipedia?

Is there a way to make sure that what we write sounds consistent with the style adopted by the majority of editors? I am not sure how people do it, but almost all articles seems to have been writte...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by yocu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Knowing when to use pictures over words

When writing about food, be it a cookbook or a food blog, as long as the media supports it, the use of pictures is going to make a difference in the quality of the work. So when I am writing about ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there stylistic overlaps between novels and comic books? [closed]

I am going to quote from a novel that in my opinion shows many stylistic overlaps of novels and comic books: The Rowan by Anne McCaffrey. I am holding that novel in my hand now. The use of a lot...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Snack_Food_Termite‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When can characters be reused? [closed]

Can one legally include a reference to, or an appearance of, a character from an existing work of fiction? How much of that character can be used? What makes this permitted or forbidden under US la...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by David Siegel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the most important characteristic of New Weird as a genre?

Recently I've stumbled across China Miéville's novels. Apparently, they fit in a genre called Weird Fiction, or to be even more specific New Weird, where the "new" is used to distinguish new writer...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Describing a person. What needs to be mentioned?

When describing the physical features of my more important characters, I often don't add much. I of course describe important features, especially if they will be relevant in the story. For example...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is quality of writing subjective, or objective?

When someone says that writing is good or bad, better or worse, is it merely a way to talk about whether something is popular, or interesting to you? Or is there more to it than that? Compare the...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Jedediah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Music & Focus During Writing [closed]

I hate listening to silence while I write, so I usually end up listening to music, but then I lose my focus. I don't really like classical or lo-fi that much and they don't help me concentrate on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Subplots better than the main plot

The main plot follows the MC while travelling through the world trying to rescue his family. While doing this however, he must overcome a lot of difficulties. These are subplots focused on other ch...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by scrp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I be myself and write what I really want even though it isn't getting much traction? [closed]

Or should I dumb down my writing and pander to what I think most people like to read? (Note: This isn't necessarily about me. It's a general question for many writers facing such a dilemma.) NB: ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user394536‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What if your narrator’s profession is author and she wants to include her writing process/specific chapters as part of her story?

Does it get too confusing if you include the narrator’s short story that she is writing within the body of her main story?

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Andee‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it alright to write the characters name when they are thinking?

I am sorry. Its a bit longer than necessary. So as not to put one entire page here, I cut a piece of the paragraph. Ian had difficulty expressing himself, so Lavi squat down in front of him, holdin...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Lucy Namikaze‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much does translating a novel cost?

I've read that writers and editors are often paid on a per-word basis. Then I did a search about the cost of translating a literary work into a different language and I've found varying information...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Secespitus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any set rules to creating a story with audience participation?

I have recently grown interested in the idea of writing a litRPG novel where each two days I will publish a chapter describing a single day of the main character and at the end of the day the reade...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Maiko Chikyu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I apply Hemingway's dialogue techniques to my own writing?

I open Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises at random (chapter 9). 'I haven't seen you since I've been back,' Brett said. 'No.' 'How are you, Jake?' 'Fine.' Brett looked at me. 'I say,' she s...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to stay excited when writing about the necessary?

I practice my writing skills by writing fan fiction. It's a great medium: no deadlines or word goals, and you get free feedback. The only problem is that as fan fiction, there are certain things yo...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In academic writing why do some recommend to avoid "announcing" the topic?

In academic writing, several articles on the topic of writing papers denounce the practice of "announcing" the topic. As an example, if a paper were to read... The goal of this study is to not...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Agriculturist‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to combat "uneven writing density"?

I'm not sure if I would "officially" classify as a discovery writer, but I usually write very freely. I get a bunch of ideas, write them down and try to put them together to create a compelling sto...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Protagonist constantly has to have long words explained to her. Will this get tedious?

A while back, I redrafted my NaNoWriMo 2017 story, but it still needs another draft. This question is about one of the concerns I have. The story takes place in a medieval fantasy setting, and the...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should a scene break always be put in place when there is change in location, times, and dates?

I have read many books where the character is in one place at a certain time and, without a scene break being utilised, they are all of a sudden in a different place at a different time, but it wo...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by N.Houghton‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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Characterizing a sentient robot: sensory data

I have a sentient robot in my novel. Truth to be told, I have many. Sentience is somewhat cheap to achieve, meaning that there are multiple artificial beings that can be considered sentient by our...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Would I be able to have my characters play "Dungeons and Dragons" in my book?

A big part of my book is that the characters play the tabletop RPG "Dungeons and Dragons". There is no content actually showing them playing it, but they do mention it. Would that be allowed?

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by unikai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Writing effectively under very brief constraints

I recently noticed a trend to a few of my questions. I am attracted to writing in places with extreme brevity. This makes sense to me on a personal level. I've always been attracted to one-liners a...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I add depth to my story or how do I determine if my story already has depth?

I am new to writing. I wrote a lot when I was a kid and teen. I wrote my first book at 6 and then again in high school. I was also in journalism. After high school, life happened. I took an almost ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Dawn Kelli‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Generalize or specialize?

If you are starting a freelance product description writing business, do you generalize or specialize? In other words, do you offer writing in an area like "product descriptions for tech companies"...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by japclass15‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it ok to use long footnotes?

In my text, I have a footnote (6 or 7 lines) that is meant to be an extra insight. It does seem, however, to be a bit large for a footnote. On the other hand, if I try to place it inside the text...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Jak‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is permission needed to use a fictitious character from another novel in my story as a point of reference?

I am writing a novel and I would like to introduce characters from other published works as time travelers. Is this a bad idea or even legal? Copyright infringement comes to mind... Is there a le...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Kalee‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should an author include user-interactive sections in his website?

Related questions: Should an author have one website or two? As an new author, how important is to have a personal website? Pros and Cons: A blog to get feedback A possible duplicate of, even i...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Examples & humor in educational podcast

I know Technical Writing is not supposed to have our personalities in it, but when I taught, I sought out educational videos/resources that had a bit of personality in them. Example: The Oatmeal's...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I use a TV sitcom name as part of my book title

I would like to use the title of a TV sitcom in the title of my book. How do I find out if this is without legal ramifications?

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Gloria McCarthy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Am I using too much exposition here? [closed]

Lillia usually arrived to school on her own. The other girls from her hometown got a later train more often than not. She purposefully arrived early to be able to complete homework she had n...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Crafting an organic female platonic relationship [closed]

There has been a story in me for quite a while. It is of two girls, set in a feudal/medieval era. They met as children. One is a antisocial bookworm, highly opinionated with a quiet steely composu...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Vigneswara Prabhu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make a setting relevant?

One piece of feedback that I got on a story I wrote is that my settings feel irrelevant, or that the entire book could have been a phone call. I am not sure how to go about fixing this. The charact...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by mprogrammer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can my story describe a world and a society without relying on individual characters?

I'm working on a story which is focused on the conditions of its world and its society and I want to tell the story of its people as a collective, the problems they create and have together and the...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Accretence‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we end a description properly?

Sometimes, I have trouble coming up with a way to end a description properly, especially one that's at the very end of a chapter. What are some of the things you can do, especially when the descrip...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Repetitive sentences

How do I start off sentences without them being too repetitive and boring? I have a problem of starting a sentence with something like "The person" and end up using "The person" in the next one aga...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by cthulong‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Would this character be classified as an antivillain, antihero, or something else entirely?

From an analysis standpoint, I'm trying to determine what classification the antagonist and protagonist in my story would fall under in terms of the classic literary labels of "hero," "villain," "a...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by stix‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there such a thing as too inconvenient?

I find myself often being irritated at elements in situations that help characters succeed, elements which are also highly unlikely or even illogical. But often, if not more, I find myself angered ...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by A. Kvåle‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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If one's first book is one genre, will publishers be less likely to accept books of a different genre by the same author?

I currently have two books, both roughly the same length and at the same point in the editing/rewriting process, and while I would like to eventually publish them both, they are from two completely...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by s.anne.w‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to integrate letters, in-universe book Snippets and the like into a story

So, let's say the main characters enter a building, a really big laboratory of sorts. They don't know what was being worked on here, because no one is still there, it's been abandoned recently. But...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Pharguin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Ambiguous sentences: How to tell when they need fixing?

A story of mine has the following sentence: Alyssa was possessed by a sudden, fierce urge to snatch the teacup out of her sister's hand and dump the contents into her perfectly arranged hai...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Evil Sparrow‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is special in API documentation compared to general technical writing?

The title says it all: what is special in Application Programming Interface documentation compared to general technical writing? What aspects should I take care of?

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Gergely‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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About sound effects

I'm writing a script that shows a speaker interacting with their audience. The speaker finishes speaking and the audience reacts. I wrote it like this. Loud CHEERS from the audience. I'm wonderin...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karen Kelly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What should the omniscient narrator call a character?

Let there be a character. Let the character's name be, for example, Alexander. Now, Alexander's parents call him 'Sasha'. His friends call him 'Xander'. His girlfriend calls him 'Alex'. In formal ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to not confuse readers with simultaneous events?

In an omniscient third person, I have 8 (practically unrelated) events going simultaneously in different parts of a large mansion. I want to present these events as they happen, but I feel jumping ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Weckar E.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What kind of writing style works for a game?

Background: I'm creating a story for a video game--it's set in a cyberpunk, futuristic setting, and it has many flows, one of its flows is that the story is so complicated and novelized, that it b...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Suhail Alhegry‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding repetition when there are two unidentified individuals

The tall figure was overwhelmingly tall. It stood in the corner of the room. The skinny figure right beside him sat on a chair. It wasn't moving at all. The tall figure moved to the opposite...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will too many characters be overwhelming? [closed]

So I have multiple stories running in the same universe, and I want a Arc that includes all the main people from each of the stories my worry is that this will become to confusing and may overload ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Kizzy05‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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"Stealing" jokes

In one of my stories, I have a character who is a bit of a smart ass, always cracking jokes at the expense of others and sometimes even himself. I often get inspired by things I find on the interne...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I start in media res and provide enough back-story to hook people, all in the first chapter?

My story (novella?) starts in media res, in the middle of the conflict that will set the rest of the story in motion. Currently I am "scene-cutting" between that event and some earlier events that...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭